Bug 7151 – Bad grammer usage on Slacker page

Bug 7151 - Bad grammer usage on Slacker page

Summary:

Bad grammer usage on Slacker page

Status:	CLOSED FIXED

Product:	MySqueezebox.com
Classification:	Unclassified
Component:	Slacker
Version:	unspecified
Platform:	PC Windows XP

Importance:	-- normal (vote)
Target Milestone:	7.0
Assigned To:	Andy Grundman

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Reported:	2008-02-14 14:55 UTC by James Richardson
Modified:	2008-02-19 10:59 UTC (History)
CC List:	1 user (show)

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Description James Richardson 2008-02-14 14:55:15 UTC

I suggest a re-write of the Slacker text to correct bad grammar usage.

Currently the text reads "Slacker is a new kind of music service, it delivers personal radio that is personalized for every listener. Slacker is effortless to use and the music is FREE."

Suggested replacement text "Slacker is a new kind of music service, it delivers internet radio that is personalized for every listener. Slacker is effortless to use and the music is FREE."

Comment 1 Andy Grundman 2008-02-14 15:40:59 UTC

Yeah it does seem a bit redundant.  Also, the comma should probably be replaced with a semicolon.

Comment 2 Matthew J. Martin 2008-02-15 16:48:07 UTC

will work directly with marketing to update this

Comment 3 Blackketter Dean 2008-02-16 12:04:48 UTC

Until we get updated text from MARKETING, please replace the comma with a semicolon and close this bug.

Comment 4 Andy Grundman 2008-02-18 11:03:51 UTC

Copy updated from Patrick in r2578.

Comment 5 James Richardson 2008-02-19 10:59:01 UTC

Verified fixed in SqueezeNetwork r2601/r17627, HW Beta