Bug 11674 – Copy changes needed for "Welcome" screen

Bug 11674 - Copy changes needed for "Welcome" screen

Summary:

Copy changes needed for "Welcome" screen

Status:	RESOLVED FIXED

Product:	SB Touch
Classification:	Unclassified
Component:	Setup
Version:	unspecified
Platform:	PC Other

Importance:	-- normal (vote)
Target Milestone:	MP
Assigned To:	Richard Titmuss

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Reported:	2009-04-06 11:55 UTC by Weldon Matt
Modified:	2009-09-08 09:32 UTC (History)
CC List:	1 user (show)

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Description Weldon Matt 2009-04-06 11:55:38 UTC

Title: "Welcome to Squeezebox Touch"

Copy: "In just a few moments, you will have complete, customizable access to music from around the world—and from any computer on your network—right here at your fingertips.

Let's start by getting you connected to your network."

Option: "I'm ready"

Comment 1 Richard Titmuss 2009-04-06 14:21:31 UTC

Fixed in r5204.

Comment 2 Weldon Matt 2009-04-06 16:31:18 UTC

Looking at r5204 - please add spaces before and after the dashes, if line breaks cannot be added.

Also, title should be "Welcome to Squeezebox Touch" instead of "Welcome" (unless there is a reason it was left out, such as the copy not being fab4-specific, or a spacing issue?)

Comment 3 Weldon Matt 2009-04-06 21:00:37 UTC

...and (since the bug is still open) Dean/Dave Gilmore/me humbly request changing "Let's start by getting you connected to your network." to "Let's start by getting connected to your network." (remove "you")

Comment 4 Richard Titmuss 2009-04-07 01:31:52 UTC

Fixed in r5209. The Welcome title was a bug, good spot.